Help!!!! Abortion Speech???….?


Written on May 22, 2009 – 2:13 am | by Drug Abuse Help

okay so i noticed that someone else had written their speech about abortion of yahoo answers and i noticed they got good feedback. I was wondering if people could please help me proofread,and revise it tell me if im missing any components things like that. PLease do not give rude feedback :) thanks A LOT :)
Have you ever thought about death, either your life or someone you know and love? How about your own child? This question may seem absurd but in reality it strikes many pregnant worldwide. What if you were the one being chosen upon whether you should live before you were even born. This is referred to as abortion.

Today im here to talk to you about this issue which concerns many, yet is chosen by many pregnant women each day.

SOme people believe abortion is acceptable in certain circumstances.Such as rape and incest. Pregnant women who choose abortions because of rape is only 1 % of the large overall number. Another circumstance may be if it had been an unplanned pregnancy. The women had been irresponsible in the first place and chose to have unprotected sex.

Abortion has a high impact on peoples lives. SOme women think after having an abortion they no longer have to worry and all theyre problems are gone. As if it never happened. They are wrong having an abortion causes them to have many long term effects. After the abortion process the physical effects can range from having defects while trying to have a baby to they may not even be able to have children. You would also have a greater risk of having breast cancer. There are emotional effects such as Depression which plays a main role folled by guilt, flashbacks of abortion, and alcohol and drug abuse.

Fetus comes from the latin word young one. It means when a baby/animal is a baby in the process of developing.
SOme say a fetus is not human but does this mean babies born around 5-6 months old are not human? I believe this is not true and that a fetus is very much human as any other baby would be( usually around the time of the abortion the baby has gotten its heart which some believe is a main symbol of life and other organs.

I hope my speech has opened your eyes about this issue and i hope other people will realize that this is wrong. Thank you

4 Responses to “Help!!!! Abortion Speech???….?”

  1. auntida said:

    May 22, 09 at 4:55 am

    It’s good the way it is.

  2. _Valerie__Due_August_13__ said:

    May 22, 09 at 5:19 am

    Just check your grammatical errors and its good to go.

  3. Something_in_the_distance_ said:

    May 22, 09 at 8:53 am

    The woman who get abortions are selfish broads. I’m a man, but I know that if I was a woman and I got pregnant, I would not be a selfish loser and Kill an innocent baby.

  4. Jakeinator21 said:

    May 22, 09 at 3:31 pm

    I think it is good but it could use a bit more authority. Speak as if you are telling people exactly how it is and if they think otherwise they are totally wrong. Also when you are giving facts about the effects of abortion maybe you could explain them more fully? I would like to know why women who have an abortion may be unable to have children in the future or why they have a greater risk of breast cancer. Don’t go way in depth because you want to keep concise and on topic but it does help to back up what you say with evidence and explanation. Otherwise i would say it is great. It flows well and it is powerful and to the point. Good luck!

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